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+ | '''I am currently completely rewriting her story from scratch so her story might be changed soon, depending on how fast I am and how much time I have.The story won't change too much, I will just explain further what happened to her since a guy from primus found out so it will be uploaded to the primus database ;P''' | ||
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| species = Demon | | species = Demon | ||
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| birthplace = Carres, Trael | | birthplace = Carres, Trael | ||
| operations = Millenium City | | operations = Millenium City | ||
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| powers = High Strength, Can summon and control melee weapons | | powers = High Strength, Can summon and control melee weapons | ||
| paraphernalia = Leather Armor, swords and axes | | paraphernalia = Leather Armor, swords and axes | ||
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== '''''<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">Life in the army</div>''''' == | == '''''<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">Life in the army</div>''''' == | ||
− | '''As such a young newcomer,Nell was mocked by the other Soldiers."Such a young woman could never be that strong!She was only recruited because she's a Hakai." they said.But Nell didn't care,it didn't matter if they wanted to cooperate with her or not.She was a Hakai after all,she just had to say a word and her enemies would "disappear".She believed in what the Intructors teached her:"Those who can't protect themselves shall perish."This sentence shaped her life.Those who didn't want to cooperate with her were left behind.Those who fought her were killed. | + | === '''''<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">Being a Recruit</div>''''' === |
+ | '''As such a young newcomer,Nell was mocked by the other Soldiers."Such a young woman could never be that strong!She was only recruited because she's a Hakai." they said.But Nell didn't care,it didn't matter if they wanted to cooperate with her or not.She was a Hakai after all,she just had to say a word and her enemies would "disappear".She believed in what the Intructors teached her:"Those who can't protect themselves shall perish."This sentence shaped her life.Those who didn't want to cooperate with her were left behind.Those who fought her were killed.General Surozur kept a close look at her, he watched her.'''<br> | ||
'''After only 1 Year the others learned to respect her.This didn't go unnoticed and quickly she was promoted.''' | '''After only 1 Year the others learned to respect her.This didn't go unnoticed and quickly she was promoted.''' | ||
− | + | === '''''<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">The Nephilims attack on Trael</div>''''' === | |
'''Now her life as soldier really began.'''<br> | '''Now her life as soldier really began.'''<br> | ||
− | '''When the Nephilim launched an Attack on ''' | + | '''When the Nephilim launched an Attack on Trael she and her squad consisting of 13 other Demons were sent to defend a small town called Legas.When they arrived everything was quiet.After three days,the Nephilim attacked Legas.Nell didn't know why the Nephilim would attack a small Town but Nell and her troop didn't care.All they cared about was defending Trael.''' |
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+ | '''First they sent small waves of Nephilim.They were easy to defend against, but something was odd.They somehow knew Nells tactics, they knew her weak points and somehow those Nephilim seemed like they were controlled.After six small waves of Nephilim a big group of Nephilim approached Legas.It was a group of about a hundred Nephilim, led by the Nephilim General Areach and Trael General Surozur.''' | ||
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+ | === '''''<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">Fight to the death</div>''''' === | ||
+ | '''Seing General Surozur standing next to General Areach,it was horrible.'''<br> | ||
+ | '''She wanted to ask "Why?Why did you do this?" but she couldn't.The hate was growing, the longer she looked at them the more the hate was growing.Nell Charged at General Surozur, trying to avoid as many Nephilim as she could.She summoned her greatsword and tried to hit General Surozur as hard as she could.She knew she didn't have a chance, he was a General and she was just a Soldier.Suddenly, when General Surozur charged Nell, she channeled all her hate into her fists,making her sword attacks stronger.Now she was on the same level as General Surozur,her hate continued to grow.Eventually she didn't notice what was happening around her, she was focusing on General Surozur.After a long battle she managed to knock the General down.''' | ||
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+ | '''"You are disgusting, betraying your own kind."''' | ||
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+ | '''"The only disgusting thing here is your weakness.You soon will see what it means to posses true power!"''' | ||
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+ | '''A dark aura began to appear around General Surozur,he was emitting immense power.When General Surozur charged Nell, General Areach threw himself before Nell, making General Surozur's sword pierce both Nell and General Areach.''' | ||
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+ | '''"You will not control me!" General Areach yelled.''' | ||
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+ | '''Then Nell passed out.''' | ||
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+ | '''When she awoke, she saw many dead Nephilim, and her wounded squad.Also there were many Traelian Soldiers who were treating the wounded's wounds.One of her squadmates approached her, greeting her with "You're awake, General.Our allies saved us but you killed General Areach.General Surozur escaped though."''' | ||
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+ | '''"General,huh?"''' | ||
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+ | '''She took a look at herself, she discovered that she was wearing some Nephilim armor parts.'''<br> | ||
+ | '''"What happened?"''' | ||
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+ | '''Two weeks later, her promotion ceremony was held in Cerres and at the same time they celebrated the victory against the Nephilim.But Nell still didn't knew what exactly happened after the sword pierced Nell and General Areach.''' | ||
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+ | =<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Appearance</div>'''''= | ||
+ | '''Nell is a 5'6 (~1.68m) tall woman.She weights about 132lbs (~60kg). Nell has red skin and orange glowing eyes.She also has Snake Bite Piercings.She has three horns on her left shoulder.When in armored form she also has 3 horns on her left leg and broken horns grow from her head that kinda look like a crown.''' | ||
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+ | =<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Personality</div>'''''= | ||
+ | '''Nell is usually a friendly person.If someone doesnt do what she wants or someone is rude to her, she can become very dangerous.She doesn't approach people often, she rather observes them than talk to them, if someone approaches her however, she usually talks to the person.Nell is a intelligent Woman and doesn't have a problem with discussing politics and so on with other people. Nell thinks that only the strong can and will survive.In her opinion, all those too weak to protect themselves aren't worth her time and should perish.''' | ||
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+ | =<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Abilities</div>'''''= | ||
+ | ==<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Skills</div>'''''== | ||
+ | '''Weapon Phasing:She can summon weapons.'''<br> | ||
+ | '''Armor Phasing:She can instantly change her armor.'''<br> | ||
+ | '''Phase Control:She can manipulate and control those items she phased.She can modify the weight of her weapons.Also she can move her weapons with her mind that way.(Like letting them float and so on).'''<br> | ||
+ | '''Aura-Canalization:She can focus her Aura on her Hands.Enabling her to lift very heavy objects.'''<br> | ||
+ | '''Might of the Hakai:She can release her Aura, enhancing her strength and damage threshold.This makes her aura visible to everyone.''' | ||
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+ | ==<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Equipment</div>'''''== | ||
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+ | ==<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Weaknesses</div>'''''== | ||
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+ | =<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Relationships</div>'''''= | ||
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+ | ==<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Allies</div>'''''== | ||
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+ | ==<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Enemies</div>'''''== | ||
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+ | ==<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Possible Allies</div>'''''== | ||
+ | === '''''<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">ARGENT</div>''''' === | ||
+ | '''Nell seems to be working with [[ARGENT]].What exactly she is doing for them, or what they are doing for her is unknown.''' | ||
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+ | =<div style="color:#101010; background-color: #600000">'''''Creator's Notes</div>'''''= | ||
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+ | --Everything on this page is subject to change as my character evolves and more of her past is being uncovered<br>I did just write a rough story for now but i most likely will make the story shorter and delete some parts because primus cant know everything, can they?.-- | ||
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+ | --English isn't my native language.If you see typos feel free to correct them. If you see some sentences that dont make sense or could use improvement feel free to tell me. Please do not edit whole sentences on your own.-- | ||
− | + | --I will create wiki entries for some Cities and Nations i mentioned on her page. They will also be used by twinks.Once they are created, feel free to place yourself into that universe.Also if you want to be linked with this character in any way, tell me.As long as it has happened in the past we can do that without RP.-- | |
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I am currently completely rewriting her story from scratch so her story might be changed soon, depending on how fast I am and how much time I have.The story won't change too much, I will just explain further what happened to her since a guy from primus found out so it will be uploaded to the primus database ;P
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Class Focus: | DPS | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Power Level: | 22 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Research & Development: | NO DATA | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Real Name: | Nelleth Rediel | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Known Aliases: | Nell, Red Woman | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Gender: | Female | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Species: | Demon | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Ethnicity: | Hakai / Traelian | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Place of Birth: | Carres, Trael | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Base of Operations: | Millenium City | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Relatives: | NO DATA | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Age: | 412 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Height: | 5'6" (~1.68m) | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Weight: | 132 lbs (~60kg) | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Eyes: | Orange | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Hair: | Black | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Complexion: | Dark Red | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Physical Build: | Normal | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Physical Features: | Snake Bite Piercings | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Identity: | Secret | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Years Active: | 221 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Citizenship: | Trael | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Occupation: | General of Treal Army | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Education: | Carres Military School Graduate | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Marital Status: | Single | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Nell's Life
Military School
At the Age of 23, Nell had to visit the Carres Military School,like all Hakai.Because she is a Hakai, everyone had high expections of her.Everybody knew that Hakai posses special abilities and are deadly in battle.She only had high grades and in Batlle lessons she easily overwhelmed all of her opponents.After she graduated at the exceptional age of 26 she joined the Traelian Army.
Life in the army
Being a Recruit
As such a young newcomer,Nell was mocked by the other Soldiers."Such a young woman could never be that strong!She was only recruited because she's a Hakai." they said.But Nell didn't care,it didn't matter if they wanted to cooperate with her or not.She was a Hakai after all,she just had to say a word and her enemies would "disappear".She believed in what the Intructors teached her:"Those who can't protect themselves shall perish."This sentence shaped her life.Those who didn't want to cooperate with her were left behind.Those who fought her were killed.General Surozur kept a close look at her, he watched her.
After only 1 Year the others learned to respect her.This didn't go unnoticed and quickly she was promoted.
The Nephilims attack on Trael
Now her life as soldier really began.
When the Nephilim launched an Attack on Trael she and her squad consisting of 13 other Demons were sent to defend a small town called Legas.When they arrived everything was quiet.After three days,the Nephilim attacked Legas.Nell didn't know why the Nephilim would attack a small Town but Nell and her troop didn't care.All they cared about was defending Trael.
First they sent small waves of Nephilim.They were easy to defend against, but something was odd.They somehow knew Nells tactics, they knew her weak points and somehow those Nephilim seemed like they were controlled.After six small waves of Nephilim a big group of Nephilim approached Legas.It was a group of about a hundred Nephilim, led by the Nephilim General Areach and Trael General Surozur.
Fight to the death
Seing General Surozur standing next to General Areach,it was horrible.
She wanted to ask "Why?Why did you do this?" but she couldn't.The hate was growing, the longer she looked at them the more the hate was growing.Nell Charged at General Surozur, trying to avoid as many Nephilim as she could.She summoned her greatsword and tried to hit General Surozur as hard as she could.She knew she didn't have a chance, he was a General and she was just a Soldier.Suddenly, when General Surozur charged Nell, she channeled all her hate into her fists,making her sword attacks stronger.Now she was on the same level as General Surozur,her hate continued to grow.Eventually she didn't notice what was happening around her, she was focusing on General Surozur.After a long battle she managed to knock the General down.
"You are disgusting, betraying your own kind."
"The only disgusting thing here is your weakness.You soon will see what it means to posses true power!"
A dark aura began to appear around General Surozur,he was emitting immense power.When General Surozur charged Nell, General Areach threw himself before Nell, making General Surozur's sword pierce both Nell and General Areach.
"You will not control me!" General Areach yelled.
Then Nell passed out.
When she awoke, she saw many dead Nephilim, and her wounded squad.Also there were many Traelian Soldiers who were treating the wounded's wounds.One of her squadmates approached her, greeting her with "You're awake, General.Our allies saved us but you killed General Areach.General Surozur escaped though."
"General,huh?"
She took a look at herself, she discovered that she was wearing some Nephilim armor parts.
"What happened?"
Two weeks later, her promotion ceremony was held in Cerres and at the same time they celebrated the victory against the Nephilim.But Nell still didn't knew what exactly happened after the sword pierced Nell and General Areach.
Appearance
Nell is a 5'6 (~1.68m) tall woman.She weights about 132lbs (~60kg). Nell has red skin and orange glowing eyes.She also has Snake Bite Piercings.She has three horns on her left shoulder.When in armored form she also has 3 horns on her left leg and broken horns grow from her head that kinda look like a crown.
Personality
Nell is usually a friendly person.If someone doesnt do what she wants or someone is rude to her, she can become very dangerous.She doesn't approach people often, she rather observes them than talk to them, if someone approaches her however, she usually talks to the person.Nell is a intelligent Woman and doesn't have a problem with discussing politics and so on with other people. Nell thinks that only the strong can and will survive.In her opinion, all those too weak to protect themselves aren't worth her time and should perish.
Abilities
Skills
Weapon Phasing:She can summon weapons.
Armor Phasing:She can instantly change her armor.
Phase Control:She can manipulate and control those items she phased.She can modify the weight of her weapons.Also she can move her weapons with her mind that way.(Like letting them float and so on).
Aura-Canalization:She can focus her Aura on her Hands.Enabling her to lift very heavy objects.
Might of the Hakai:She can release her Aura, enhancing her strength and damage threshold.This makes her aura visible to everyone.
Equipment
Weaknesses
Relationships
Allies
Enemies
Possible Allies
ARGENT
Nell seems to be working with ARGENT.What exactly she is doing for them, or what they are doing for her is unknown.
Creator's Notes
--Everything on this page is subject to change as my character evolves and more of her past is being uncovered
I did just write a rough story for now but i most likely will make the story shorter and delete some parts because primus cant know everything, can they?.--
--English isn't my native language.If you see typos feel free to correct them. If you see some sentences that dont make sense or could use improvement feel free to tell me. Please do not edit whole sentences on your own.--
--I will create wiki entries for some Cities and Nations i mentioned on her page. They will also be used by twinks.Once they are created, feel free to place yourself into that universe.Also if you want to be linked with this character in any way, tell me.As long as it has happened in the past we can do that without RP.--