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Rave says, "You know what Malic? Do you know we are technically inside your moms? You better not be making any earthquakes." Malic replies, "Ew, gross." Rave says, "Not really, they are just the doorway. If something was to happen to all of them at once. We would be stuck here in the lost dimension with no gate to Earth." Rave says, "When I run out of power I automatically get sent back here. It's the reason I keep you boys with me. I need to spend the little intervals I have on earth with your mothers. But here I have custody of you and I dont know what I'd do without my sons."
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Rave says, "You know what Malic? Do you know we are technically inside your moms? You better not be making any earthquakes." Malic replies, "Ew, gross." Rave says, "Not really, they are just the doorway. If something was to happen to all of them at once. We would be stuck here in the lost dimension with no gate to Earth." Rave says, "When I run out of power I automatically get sent back here. It's the reason I keep you boys with me. I need to spend the little intervals I have on earth with your mothers. But here I have custody of you and I dont know what I'd do without my sons." Rave continues, "I can honestly say, the quite time in wanted was becoming too much. Your company keeps me sane."
  
  
 
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Act 5 Children of Rave

  • The Legendary Black Pegasus Guy
  • Funk Kill Blasphemy
  • Nuclear Accident in China's coast, Capsol Corp
  • The Oroboros
  • Sons of Rave
  • Rave Vs Son Pious
  • The Oroboros Agency


Edgy story warning. If you are easily triggered. move along nicely.

Act 5 B Side is From Act 1-10 at different views. It's partly a recap that shows his children grow up. Acts are timeline markers. I might just fill them into the story later but right now I'm trying not to make things too messy.


Link to Offspring

http://primusdatabase.com/index.php?title=Sons_of_Rave


The Bludmother

The nursery room for Rave's children pods is the Bludhouse mother ship. Only this behemoth of rich nutrients can sustain the life that is lich. It's something alien. It's sci-fi.


Rave children made him feel secretly vulnerable. And with all his power it drove he off knowing that there was possibly greater forces he will have to face. At certain lowes he would recognize his mortality and beg the gods for forgiveness. But never to let anyone hear him. It was always in a deranged panic attack that he begged and screamed at the sky. He tried to reason to the wind why his actions were always necessary. And sometimes asking god to allow him to kill. It was madness.

Baby Mama Drama

Act 1

For the firsts to announce they was carrying Rave's child. He replied with an expressionless, "I knew. I'm sorry I didn't tell you because I didn't think it was possible but then I saw it growing in you. Believe I have the power to control where or not I want a child telepathically from conception. I plan to study what ever comes out. If you'll have it, it's not to late to turn back." He gets replies with sighs, "If you'll have it??? - What ever come out? - You sound like a robot - Please stop referring to our children as your little test subjects." Rave mentions that 'he had a child before he knew any of them. He says that he cannot even remember his first girlfriend name. Or what happened to her.


Act 4

Following the Legion v Martian war. Rave creates a settlement in Africa for the Martians that followed. Rubi asks him, "What will you do about our children." You can tell that she, Centuari, Venus and Liga are expecting. Rave responses, "My empire here on Earth. For my first son I will call him Emperor. He will take back Mars for you."


Act 4

Braille wants to be more of a mother to her children for Rave. But she barely knows them and Rave is always busy. Robots raises their children instead and then they get to see them. Rave himself doesn't like the idea of motherhood for his women because it signals times are changing and they are growing up. Rave selfishly wants to hang on to that youth as long as possible. You can tell because each girl has about 1-3 kids by now and he still others them to dress vulgar. In a sense you can understand why Pious and some of his kids dislike him. Pious cannot be considered the villian regardless of having mysterious selfish ways.

Act 5

Liga is disagreeing with Rave in the poorly lit room. She fold her arms and stomps a foot like she is bout to cry. Rave walks up to her and smack her three times lightly on her face. Rave says, "Ligaaaa, get your **** together. I you did as I told you the first place you would be in this mess. Go to your room I'll handle it." Rave hears foots steps in the background. He looks back a his toddler daughter Doyenne standing quietly in the dark. Rave says, "Doyenne? I didn't see you there. You look so much like a little boy." He picks her up and says, "Let me tell you. Your mommy is young and emotional okay. You never let no man speak to you like that. You here me?" Doyenne nods. She says, "I want my mommy." Rave says, "Bad... She's acting like a little girl. And when I speak to her she cannot even answer me." Rave still changes his heart and bring Doyenne to her mother. Liga sitting on the bed takes Doyenne from Rave. Rave holds them. Liga smiles.

Act 6

His daughter were beautiful. They stayed with their mothers in the odas. Odas are large garden room that hosted his women. They were forbidden form interaction with outsiders. The girls had no education. It was not important concidering their father was a rich power dictator. His daughters learned by watching the mothers interaction with him. At some point the girls developed crushes. Enticed by the beauty of his daughters they themselves are reabsorbed as wives. This is not clear to the public nor can tell which is which. The women use forbidden knowledge to cheat the aging processand bunch together in concubine. Rave knows that the ways of the Legion god is not acceptable to the outside world. He knows that if he doesn't defeated the creator gods. He will surely burn in hell. He would be fine with that. But he doesn't want the same punishment for his women. So it adds a desperation to complete his task. From an outside point of view it give the so called good guys initiative to want he expelled. But he sit on a giant black pyramid. At the top his throne and women all over the stairs. They look down in pity on anyone who apposes their Master, Roman.


Even some of Rave sons believed that their father had to be destroyed. Some wanted his place some wanted him to change his ways. But they could do nothing with a great battle. They had to look him in his eyes for him to read their mind. He knew how each of them thought of him. They were all terrified of Rave. He encouraged his sons to try to slay him if they could. He accepted their challenge with glee and made him proud. It's the same hopelessness Rave's women felt as well. They could not keep secrets from him. If they didn't look him in the eye he would know they are hiding something. But he was so powerful they knew he would just forgive them or not bother with their petty thoughts. They believed they needed to constantly worshipped and beg Rave for forgivenes. Which was right. He could go from chill to intimidation very quickly. And everyone knew to be quiet in his presence until he allowed them to speak.


Scene: With a great smile Rave shouts, "Hah! My foolish boy just thought of killing me! Come here boy let me run your head!" He walks towards his son. He continues, "Do not be afraid child! I know it is not your time to die." He pats his son head. Rave explains, "If I wanted to kill you head would of already fled. Get stronger. Defeat me because I do not know of tomorrow and the crimes that I may have done." A small part of Rave hates himself for what he have become. He hopes his boys would do better than him and even go as far as possibly ending his immortality. As messed up as he is, his cause is nobel. How does one judge a being like this? Where would you categorize a being of his making?


Think of stories. After the deluge noah sends out a raven. The raven does not return. Maybe he has found land. But still uncertain Noah then sends out a dove. The dove returns with an olive branch. You'd think the raven failed. But you see the raven is a creature with a task no other could accomplish. The raven is a scavenger. His real job was to take away the mountains of dead from the view of the righteous. Quote, 'The eye that makes fun of a father and hates to obey a mother will be plucked out by ravens in the valley and eaten by young vultures.' Symbolically the vultures are mankind tendency to abuse the ignorance of others. The raven is Rave. The raven is a scapegoat. He accomplishes his goals through sin so that non others will have to handle it. Parallel the Nazarene and the serpent Lucifer as the same being. Somebody has to do the dirty work. Somebody has to oversee the bad underworld as well as the paradise of heavens. It makes the savoir the same as the anti-christ. Rave is the new savoir and the anti-christ as well. You think of gods as perfect in one trait but it is not so. As long as the spirit and soul coexist the body is often in debate.


Rave is not after his girls like some type of desperate sickness he has to have. His views are calculative. He wants the best for them by keeping them close as possible. They are truly just in the background being idle till their behavior becomes weird. The story serves to show the harmful effects of boredom. Boredom leads to addiction. Take these life lessons from Rave and his family friendly content as you tune into your device scenes. The god Rave is watching you like the raven's vision. He is the evolution of the acceptable modern media family. Like many show which showed up their idea of the perfect family values but behind the scenes all sorts of corruption festered and deceit came from celebrity idols. He hates what he sees when he looks at mankind because it reminds the god of his imperfection. He tries to destroy sin so he wouldn't have to be ranked in with it.


Chastity and Cameila goes to Rave. Cameila explains, "Rave, your sons are demons. Luckily some of them inherited goodness. But not you daughters. We were maybe wrong about the first anti-christ pridiction. But the Annunaki blood rule principle states that a ruler comes from the second daughter generation. You must never have a child with your daughter." He then lashes out in anger by grabbing Cameila by the neck. Chasity shouts, "Let her go!" But Rave chokes Chastity with telekinesis as he stares Cameila in the eyes. Rave shouts, "She is the one cursing me. She is the whole reason I wander this earth as a ghost!" Cameila groans, "Rave! You're killing us." He then let go. Chastity falls to the ground and tear drops hit the floor. She says, "Why would you ask us to advise you. If we cannot speak freely?... Dammit Rave you made me cry again." Cameila scrambles to help Chastity on the ground. Cameila says, "It's okay. Stop talking. Just rest." Rave explains, "I'm sorry. It's all I am. When my mind is clear. I hate this. I hate myself. I hate the things I do. I wish was like the monks. I know zero restraint." He kneels over Cameila shoulder.


Rave explains, "I've entrusted Chastity to kill me with a holy weapons if I ever go to far. If you feel like it now I wouldn't stop you. Go into my dimension and end my life." Chastity says, "Shut up idiot. You're never going to know when I shoot you." He replys, "That's my girl... Cameila, tell me more about the Annunaki laws."

Act 6.2

Arc Angel Stacy after finding out Rave is her Father goes to stay within his empire. She brings along her robot Friend Christine. Due to rising threats the girls starts to feel like prisoners but the manor is large.


Sai and Stacy is picking coconuts out on the beach a little distance from the one of the house. They are wearing very little bikini or loincloth with beads and body paint symbolize their most tribal of ways. Uhm is up in the tree as Meredith and Peep comes along walking up to Stacy is point up as to direct Uhm. Sai says, "The ripe one over your head, stupid." Uhm replies, "They're all over my head idiot that's why it's a tree." Stacy laughs, "Just throw it down monkey, pick them." Meredith reaches them and asks, "Are y'all playing survivor?" Sai says, "Rave is going to be offline for a while. It would be nice to handle things for ourselves for a change." Meredith says, "That's kinda funny because I'm pretty sure the three of us could fly." Sai says, "Why are you trying to break the immersion?" Stacy says, "That's what we were telling Uhm but she wanted to show us how it's done." Coconuts fall Stacy and Sia cover their head to run out from under the tree. Sai says, "Watch it." Stacy says, "Um-Um, I think she was aim for us." Uhm laughs manically.


All the girls walk back carrying they coconuts. They see Rave on top Christine massaging sun lotion on her back. Sai says, "What the hell Rave? Really? Your said you were going offline." Meredith says, "That's twice for the morning I've seen something ridiculous." Rave says slightly, "What? I came back." Then shrugs and the fades away. Christine groans, "Raaaave don't stop?" But Rave is long gone. She then gets up with her hair messy and looking tired. Meredith asks, "I know that face. Did it happen?" Christine replies, "Yeh." All the girls scream in excitement but Stacy just stays smiling. Flashback, it's a large house made almost completely out of bamboo. Christine comes in from the big blue barrel pool wearing a green tie-dye swimsuit. Fanceen and Zamora is seem from the large opening they are still swimming. Water runs from the roof out of the bamboo and sprinkle down outside as they play. In the back is all tropical Forestry. A few steps in and Christian meets Rave who just materialized by the standing kitchen counter which serves like and open bar. She wears a large flawless smile as he embraces get at the elbow. He shift his neck stiff and says, "Having a good time?" She says, "Yeah." He places his thumb on het lower lip. She says while laughing, "No way. You gotta work for me." He laughs then she laughs too. He takes a few steps right of the kitchen. A large circle bed hung from the ceiling is halfway out side to the patio opposite side of the room to the pool in the back and now facing the beach front. End Flashback. Sai starts chanting, "One of us, One of us." Stacy says, "Cut the dam coconuts." Peep teases, "Omg. She jealous." Just to creat controversy. Stacy making a face as she adjusts her strap says, "I'm not * jealous, I just don't wanna hear it. She's my best friend and it's weird. Please..." All the other girls pause in silence then laugh. Fanceen and Zamora takes a seat to joins them and Fanceen says, "Welcome to paradise." Uhm brings a cutlass and starts chopping. Christine says, "I'm a Caribbean girl. Let me cut mine."


Sai stands with her hands on her back as she observes. They're trying to teach Peep to open a jellynut but hopelessly as ever. After witnessing Peep make a mess out of a coconut with the cutlass. Sai says to Uhm, "Maybe you should just do the rest." Sai continues, "That's what I'm talking about, most of y'all girls wouldn't last a single day without help." Meredith says, "Shame, Y'all raise her like that. How'd you spend your whole life on a coconut beach and cannot chop a jelly?" Peep says, "Fine, I will never do nothing. My powers are surveillance it's not necessary hands on." Stacy says, "I'm sure it's fine. Rave promised me I'd be a princess forever. I could make a robot handle this." Zamora says, "That's still using your powers." Stacy replies, "Using my powers? Your using the little dragon to hold you drink right now. Not all of us have brute strength like some of you. So that technically using powers as well."


Wip


In the afternoon Stacy summons Rave for a picnic on the beach. They sit rather close to the water and this spotnwqs chosen in attempt that she would not be disturbed by the others. From the other girls spying in the distance Meredith asks, "What is she doing?" Yela comments, "Dam gurl lose her mind." Peep uses her powers to summon an eye ball over her. As she covers one eye. Rave the charge air particle displacement notices Peeps invisible eye has appeared over them. But he doesn't say nothing to Stacy and she doesn't know it's there.

Rave Industries Hosts First Ever M2F Trans Birth

Plot points

  • Scene/vibe- Sunny and overcast, night and day
  • Rave uses Jada as test subject because not only because Slip and Lulu is slender but they are still pre-op. She has the right body size for the experiment.
  • Jada - post-op, but no female reproductive system. These works done in Japan before Rave. The implants will be bio-mechanical, coming from Rave Labs and trade marked with Enki's initials.
  • Ignorant people hate and protest this, it's not the trans part they are ignorant towards but the fact that they think this breakthrough in science is evil
  • We have news, talk shows, stigma, buzz
  • Locations - high tech labs and hospitals, girls remain unphased by protest due to Rave living in private resort areas but they make appearances in the city for high celebrity meets
  • Crazy how Rave so powerful and scart but some would still protests against. Rave has somewhat changed over time, he realizes killing his enemies is not always the answer and reflect his growth as a character
  • Somewhat grey sky, symbolizes Enlil(God's) observation(but he never shows) from the protesters point of view they see it as dark times, but Rave finally sees a brighter future
  • How the surgery goes, complications?
  • Healing process and more talk shows, examinations, questions of when she will use it?
  • How will the child be implanted, Natural or syringe? Someone suggest the natural method to let it feel more human. Rave compares mechanic is how we all been living for so long so what is even human any more?
  • The birth and what it symbolizes?
  • Who is the child and the hat they symbolize?
  • What happens after?

5.5

Father Son In Spirit

Dirt

Act 5


Prologue: Day 300. Attempted to impregnate the martian queens successful However, the offspring is taking an unusually long time to progress when I have witness some moving faster. Contrary to the seers warning of the anti-christ within my seed. Yet I cannot stress the importance of an heir to the planet Mars. Temporary taken by Hated-Apollo, my queen refuge in Africa. Delegated to the nursery on Nemesis, the Bludmother. Days spent overseeing the offspring in hibernation pod. Prior to the procedure my mind shifted to another offspring. Focus, a small metallic ball which I have named Malic. It is the results of crossing with my own daughter GAIA. He some what resembles my oracles holy water drone, NIM. I sense a small magnetic force within but it's mostly rocks that gravitate towards it. I assume the pod is ready to hatch so I've taken it to the XD. Unlike my other sons. Gaia was created by accident without a mother so not knowing what will come from her is best I exercise caution.


Rave says, "I x-rayed his internals but non of the internal mechanism makes sense to me, unless I compare him to a cell. My son appears to be some sort of sentient metallic ball." Malic hovers and vibrates before Rave for the first time. The ball let's of a blue northlight-ish glow like Rave. Rave doesn't know what to do or say to it. It pulls up rocks to make a animated statue reflection of Rave around itself which it controls from the stomach area. "Father." It says in a child-like metallic voice. Rave thinks, "This cannot be the anti-christ."


From the lost dimension, Rave teleports to his martian wives in Africa. Gaia is with them temporarily. Gaia asks, "You let my child hatch without me?" Rave replies, "I had to exercise caution, You are 2nd generation making it 3rd. The third generation according to Babylonian lore is always more powerful and therefore might contests me." Absolutely * right, the mysterious Malic has dormant powers to become an entire living planet even a universe if giving time to multiply but they just don't know that yet.


Wip


Rave places Malic in the XD. Malic enjoys it's time terraforming land surfaces into various magnetized constructs. Learning from replicating the already floating land platforms in the lost dimension. He started to build walk ways and bridges that defy gravity. Rave says, "Yah Malic, this was looking kinda dull. Build a few structures for me."


Rave returns to the XD to see his son Malic but he is approached by 2 balls instead of 1. Rave asks, "What, you made a friend?" Malic says, "No father, I moulted. I can make copies like you." Rave is not to happy about that but doesn't say anything. Malic says, "You told me to build structures so I figured I could maximize efficience." Rave replies, "Oh sorry son. I didn't need it that bad. I just figured you'd have fun. Take your time please. The XD is endless." To which Malic replies, "Endless?" As he stares into the unknown. This could only mean problems.


Upon returning it seams Malic has made endless copies of himself. Some active and some inactive are used to hold up larger structure. Malic managed to build almost an entire alienic town of himself." Rave thinks, "At least, malic gives off a light source. It's free energy."


Rave asks, "Malic wanna play clone tag? You mother was thinking I should play with you more." Malic says, "Tag dad, how unlike you?" Rave asks, "Malic why is your voice deep now?" Malic replies, "I thought I had to be a child. I realized I'm too evolved to do such childish things like play." Rave groans, "No I missed your whole cute phase already, I thought I had more time." Rave picks up Malic and says, "Bullshit son, I'm going to play ball with you weather you like it or not." Rave yeets malic as far as he can. Then Rave laughs. Another copy of Malic say, "Really father? This means war." Malic yeets Rave off the platform with a rock slide. Rave and his son starts to spar. Malic says, "Of course you want to teach me to fight but I am a builder. I don't destroy things." Rave says, "This is good. I like that. Your powers can be very destructive if not controlled. At least I won't have to worry about you trying to overthrow me."


Rave says, "You know what Malic? Do you know we are technically inside your moms? You better not be making any earthquakes." Malic replies, "Ew, gross." Rave says, "Not really, they are just the doorway. If something was to happen to all of them at once. We would be stuck here in the lost dimension with no gate to Earth." Rave says, "When I run out of power I automatically get sent back here. It's the reason I keep you boys with me. I need to spend the little intervals I have on earth with your mothers. But here I have custody of you and I dont know what I'd do without my sons." Rave continues, "I can honestly say, the quite time in wanted was becoming too much. Your company keeps me sane."